This is Cassandra Ravein, a Word-Mage from the continent of Malterra in the world of Tvastur. She can predict possible futures using a coin.
Simply put, the second chapter of my comic/manga is out. If you'd like to find out more, feel free to check it out—it's free! Well, actually... if you like it, please leave a "like" :D
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Brilliant! I remember you! You asked us for feedback about the cover. Very glad to see you're working on this :)
Is there a first chapter I've missed, to read before this?
Do you have some links?
[Edit] I found it globalcomix.com - Infitrus Episode One (2nd one in full on same website)
Also, I've read both Episodes now. It looks brilliant. The world building is really interesting, the characters are beginning to become interesting and the narrative seems to be really well structured - I'm left "wanting more", which is a good place to be. I think it's going to be a really good graphic novel. It's great and thank you for sharing this with us :)
[Also edit] Also, quite minor (doesnt affect understanding), but there's a possible missing word near the end of Ep#2 - "taken for himself by alchemical"
Absolutely — thank you so much for taking the time to read both episodes and share such thoughtful feedback! It genuinely means a lot to me. I’m especially glad to hear that the worldbuilding is interesting to you, because I was honestly worried that the lore might feel too dense and overwhelming. Knowing that it’s making you want to learn more about the world and its characters is incredibly encouraging.
And yes, you were absolutely right about that missing word. 😄 It turns out the word simply didn’t fit in the text box during editing, and I somehow failed to notice it.
Drumroll... 🥁 - OPERATIONS!
Thank you again for catching it and for reading INFITRUS! It really means a lot. 🙏
Thank you so much! Here’s the general link — read it on whichever platform is most convenient for you.
https://lnk.bio/23off_Sugar