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[-] thisbenzingring@lemmy.today 12 points 1 week ago* (last edited 1 week ago)

there is a song by the band called Morpheus, written and sung by Mark Sandman

When he was younger, he was a cab driver and got stabbed in the chest and almost died. He knew his life would not be as long as it should have been and always made sure to live it to the fullest.

He died on stage performing

one of his songs

Do not go quietly unto your grave

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yP7AOzzSRx4

I think of this song a lot, this poem hits that same mark for me

I am also reminded of Tecumseh and his famous speech. I have found this to be so important that I hold it deep to my core. It is this same feeling

“So live your life that the fear of death can never enter your heart. Trouble no one about their religion; respect others in their view, and demand that they respect yours. Love your life, perfect your life, beautify all things in your life. Seek to make your life long and its purpose in the service of your people. Prepare a noble death song for the day when you go over the great divide. Always give a word or a sign of salute when meeting or passing a friend, even a stranger, when in a lonely place. Show respect to all people and grovel to none. When you arise in the morning give thanks for the food and for the joy of living. If you see no reason for giving thanks, the fault lies only in yourself. Abuse no one and no thing, for abuse turns the wise ones to fools and robs the spirit of its vision. When it comes your time to die, be not like those whose hearts are filled with the fear of death, so that when their time comes they weep and pray for a little more time to live their lives over again in a different way. Sing your death song and die like a hero going home.”

This is good medicine, thanks for sharing the poem

[-] rockSlayer@lemmy.blahaj.zone 4 points 1 week ago

Thanks for sharing! I've always wanted more art and prose that reflect the feeling I get from this poem. I've always extended this poem to mean that no matter what you achieve, you will wish you had achieved more while on your deathbed. Therefore the only thing to be done to rage against the dying of the light is to unequivocally fight for what you believe in.

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