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[–] SpinMeAround@aussie.zone 6 points 5 months ago (1 children)

There's a lot to unpack there, wow! What a beautiful piece of writing though, nicely done!

[–] mysticgreg@aussie.zone 5 points 5 months ago (1 children)

Came here to say the same thing about how well written that was - time for you to write a short story I think! =)

[–] just_kitten@aussie.zone 2 points 5 months ago

Aw thanks you guys, I thought it was pretty disjointed word salad but I admittedly got caught up in a poetic mood halfway through. I do get very vivid dreams from time to time and they are so symbolic and emotionally affecting that writing them out tends to have interesting results