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Hi, I'd appreciate feedback on some stories I've written recently: (mastodon.phoenixtrap.com)
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@writing Hi, I'd appreciate feedback on some stories I've written recently:

- "Between": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/between/

- "Abigail Sterling": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/abigail-sterling/

- "The Beautiful Prison": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/the-beautiful-prison/

- "La Petite Mort": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/la-petite-mort/

I openly disclose that they are AI-assisted in character creation, development, and in their writing, but they're emphatically not low-effort AI slop.

All have appropriate content warnings and estimated reading times.

Thanks for your time.

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[-] Quilotoa@lemmy.ca 4 points 10 months ago

You might want to try Critique Circle. You critique the work of others and submit your own work to be critiqued. Usually, you'll read three short stories or chapters, and the three credits you earn will allow you to submit one your own. It, then, is typically critiqued by three authors.

[-] SweetCitrusBuzz@beehaw.org -2 points 10 months ago

Sounds awful.

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